10 thoughts on “Write on Edge: Autumn Is Home

    • October 21, 2011 at 8:51 pm
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      thanks for your encouragement!

    • October 21, 2011 at 8:51 pm
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      I’ve got 7 month old twins…so I’m imagining what that’s like when they’re big enough to run around so I have to chase and scoop.

  • October 18, 2011 at 3:11 pm
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    “I welcome autumn like a prodigal child that has been absent for years squandering her inheritance.”

    What a cheeky image – I love it, and I love how you followed up in the same vein 🙂

    Also “famished” was a key word choice – nicely done!

    • October 21, 2011 at 8:52 pm
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      I feel like I use the same words sometimes over and over for like a month…it just fits.

  • October 18, 2011 at 11:19 pm
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    Oh my- your poignancy? I love.

    Every word is well chosen, well placed here.

    This line especially, “I welcome autumn like a prodigal child that has been absent for years squandering her inheritance”- is gold.

    • October 21, 2011 at 8:52 pm
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      Thank you! You make me feel like I’m not a complete idiot! LOL

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